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David Kirkby's avatar

For me, dear Nazish, this poem radiates both love and a sense of... mortality.

Love - in every form - is never simple, even when it seems so.

Love transforms us. Love has consequence...

Those are my first thoughts on reading

this simple, but not so simple, poem.

Best wishes

Dave

Nazish's avatar

It has been a heavy week, David. I will DM you.

School of Blue's avatar

Superb.

Nazish's avatar

Thanks, Richard

Rebecca Cook's avatar

WOW. Just....wow. This is amazing. I love the whole thing. I think the first and second parts were what really blew me away. I will come back to this in a couple of days. It's just superb.

Nazish's avatar

And here I thought I blew it! 😂

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Gorgeous Naz, truly💚

Nazish's avatar

Thanks so much, Holly