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Lois Rowley's avatar

I love the contemplative tone of this poem Naz

Some days We are broad enough and spacious enough to allow our inner ocean to absorb life’s fevers. I feel that sometimes too.

This poem is delicious ( like salty not too hot potato chips) how the story of life is backgrounded in the poem and your body/hands and the vast body of ocean are foregrounded together. It’s as if your body is remembering her earth mother, her worth and the girth of her capacity for life.

Such hopeful reverence for all of our lives.

Soothing hands are your poetry hands Naz, thank you 🙏🏼

Azure Jo Storm's avatar

A lovely refreshing piece!

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